I can definitely relate to this poem, but not on a friendship kinda way, more as a close relative. My friends aren't that kinda people, and I don't really mind, because I'm not either.

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viva chile mieerrrr

Nice....

"Be thankful for what you have and tell someone close to you how much you love them." You look deep into things., and by saying that, I know that you're someone who doesn't take things for granted. You know what? your words strongly remind me of two entries I wrote in my journal.

"Value them now, when you still have the time to look at them, see them, feel them. When they still have the time to let you observe them. I understand that life is fragile. A fragile little thing. And that is why we have to value what we have right now, value your family; your parents, your sisters, brothers, cousins, aunts, uncles, and your friends. Don't let a second go by without telling them that you love them. Don't regret telling them your love when it's too late. "

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A musician must play music, poet must write, an artist must paint if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What one can be, must be.

that's how I was thinking of it as well. I hope it can relate to lots of people's situations.

*sniffles* so true

people who truly care for you will understand and deal with all your emotions. through good and bad as well....lovely work!

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wait......did I really just say that?

That's so sweet

The simplistic rhyming pattern was appropriate for this poem, and I like how it was so easy to understand (God knows my poetry isn't) and the flow went so well.

The message was so heartwarming.

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HOLY SHIT! DeviantDICTIONARY is coming back!

thank you! I'm glad you liked it

I know this feeling, and it makes me sad and happy at the same time. Very well written, I can totally relate. Very good

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I died for you.

thanks. good to know someone can feel the same